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2017年12月27日 星期三

作文致勝關鍵 - 寫作範例100A

Unit 4: Whenever I Feel Lonely
A、句型重點Sentence Pattern Focus
I. even though… = although… = though… 雖然、儘管…          even if… 即使、就算
Even though many people around me are chatting and laughing, I still feel alone in the crowd.
I didn’t get upset even though Jason declined my invitation.
Even though Ken is a ten-year-old child, he can speak four languages.
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. 雖然沒有人贊同我的看法,我不覺得氣餒。
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2. 即使我當時說實話,我想也沒有人會相信我。
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II. such as + N/Ving 例如、譬如                such + Ns + as + N, N, and N 這樣的
We did many things together, such as singing songs on the way home from school, playing basketball on the basketball court, and reading comic books at my house.
Jason is good at playing sports such as baseball, basketball, and golf.
I have been to many countries, such as Japan, Korea, and Singapore.
àI have been to such countries as Japan, Korea, and Singapore.
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. 在暑假期間,我從事許多戶外活動,例如衝浪、健行以及釣魚。
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2. 我喜歡閱讀像<老人與海>這類的勵志小說。
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Unit 4: I. 1. Even though no one agreed with my idea, I didn’t feel discouraged.
        2. I think nobody would believe me even if I told the truth then.
      II.1. During the summer vacation, I did many outdoor activities such as surfing, hiking, and fishing.

        2. I like reading such inspiring novels as The Old Man and the Sea.

B、寫作構思流程Writing Process
主題:說明自己如何排遣寂寞
時態:目前的心態用現在簡單式,過去的回憶用過去簡單式來敘述。
鋪陳:1.主旨句:每當我感到寂寞的時候,我總是會以電話或電子郵件的方式和我最要好的朋友聯絡。(Sentence 3)
2.細節發展:和最要好的朋友聯絡,總讓我回想起過往美好的時光。(Sentence 4~7)
(1)每天無憂無慮。(2)和好朋友一起做很多事。(3)有很多話可以聊。
3.結論句:回首往日美好時光,我總是感到慰藉,不再感到寂寞。(Sentence 8)
注意:1.題目的主詞是I,所提到的一定是自己的生活經驗,切忌用他人(you/she/he)的生活經驗,以免離題。
2.主旨句不一定落在短文的第一句,有可能出現在前言的後面。例如範文一開始先簡單描述作者本身的狀況,讓讀者稍有認識,隨後才切入主題。
3.談到如何排遣孤獨或寂寞,應舉出數項例子,通常以三項為宜,文章的內容才夠豐富。
C、範文Sample
As a teenager, I sometimes think that no one can share in my happiness and sorrow. Even though many people around me are chatting and laughing, I still feel alone in the crowd.

However, whenever I feel lonely, I just contact my best friend by phone or by e-mail. By doing so, I can recall the time we spent together in school, when we shared many things and I found happiness. In my memories, we were always carefree, and we did many things together, such as singing songs on the way home from school, playing basketball on the basketball court, and reading comic books at my house. We always had a lot to talk about. Sometimes I didn’t even need to speak, and my friend would know exactly what I was going to say. Looking back on those good old days, I am always comforted, and I don’t feel lonely anymore.

D.實戰演練提示:我們的心情常因周遭環境或自身心境改變而有所不同,而人們也不喜歡寂寞的感覺。請以”Whenever I Feel Lonely”為題,寫一篇短文闡述一種你排遣寂寞的方法。


Unit 3 One Thing Ive Learned from My Teacher
A、句型重點Sentence Pattern Focus
I. for example… = take sth. / sb. for example 舉例來說
I have learned a lot from her. For example, last summer, my class planned a trip to Kenting.
My family usually dine on special occasions. For example, last Friday night, we had a dinner at the Fridays to celebrate my grandpas 80th birthday.
Fruit can be made into different dishes. Take pumpkins for example. There are pumpkin stews, pumpkin pies, pumpkin soup, etc.
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. 王太太對她的孩子很嚴格。舉例來說,她要求他們在學校要拿到好成績。
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2. Jason不只是個好爸爸,他也是個好老師。舉例來說,他下班後總是很有耐心地教導他女兒數學。
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II. those who… 凡是的人
If I can, I will help those who are in need, and I will ask for nothing in return.
God helps those who help themselves.
Those who love others will be loved, too.
I admire those who work hard to realize their dreams.
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. 凡是夠成熟的人都應能分辨對錯。
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2. 凡是未滿十八歲的人都不能駕駛車輛。
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B、寫作構思流程Writing Process
主題:從老師身上學到的人生智慧
時態:敘述一段過去發生的事,應用過去簡單式。
鋪陳:1.主旨句:Klark小姐是我的英文老師,我從她身上學到很多東西。(Sentence 1)
2.細節發展:一則故事的描述基本上是由whowhenwhywhere以及what happened等五個疑問詞的答案所連結而成的。(Sentence 2~9)
(1)人物:我和Klark小姐。
(2)時間:去年夏天。
(3)發生原因:因為我父母無法負擔到墾丁旅遊的費用,因此我無法參加班遊。
(4)地點:Klark小姐的辦公室。
(5)發生經過:Klark小姐想要給我兩千元,一剛開始我並沒有接受,不過她讓我理解人要互相幫忙的道理。
3.結論句:我從老師身上學到,當我有能力時,我會幫助那些有需要的人。(Sentence 10)
注意:若文中提到對個人影響的篇幅不長,可以接在故事後,以段落寫作的方式呈現;但是若對個人的影響無法用一句話結束,則可以自成一段,結合成一篇短文。
C、範文Sample
Ms. Klark is my English teacher, and I have learned a lot from her. For example, last summer, my class planned a trip to Kenting. I couldn’t join in because the trip would be too expensive for my parents to afford. Ms. Klark heard about this and called me into her office. She took out NT$2,000 and said that she hoped I would be able to join my class on the trip. It was very touching, but I didn’t take the money. I told her that although I did want to go with my classmates to Kenting. I didn’t want to spend someone else’s money. “Ms. Klark understood what I meant, but told me that if she could give me a hand in this case, then I could learn to help someone else in the future. In the end, I accepted the money, and Ms. Klark’s words have always remained in my mind. I learned a valuable lesson from my teacher: if I can, I will help those who are in need, and I will ask for nothing in return.
D.實戰演練提示:在我們生活週遭的人們,如父親、母親、師長或朋友,對我們都有某種程度的影響。請以 “One Thing I’ve Learned from _____”為題寫一篇短文,敘述他或她曾經做過令你印象最深刻的一件事,並說明這件事對你的影響。


Unit 2: If I Were a Big Movie Star
A、句型重點Sentence Pattern Focus
I. A consist of B = A be made up of B  AB所組成(A表示整體,B表示組成的個體)
My life would not consist of only exams and the daily routine.
= My life would not be made up of only exams and the daily routine.
The committee consists of ten doctors and fifteen scientists.
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. 這個班級是由21個男孩和24個女孩所組成的。
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2. 這份餐點是由一杯果汁、一個漢堡以及一些薯條所組成的。
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Unit 2: I. 1. This class consists of twenty-one boys and twenty-four girls.
        2. This meal consisted of a glass of juice, a hamburger, and some French fries.

II. How + Adj./Adv. + (S + be/V)! = What (+ a/an) + Adj. + N (+ S + be/V) !…真是
Oh, how wonderful my life would be, if I were a movie star!
How interesting the show is!
How wonderful! We can go shopping together!
What big eyes Alice has!
What a cute baby!
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. 謝謝你提醒我要關燈。你真體貼!
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2. 真可惜!你昨晚應該來參加派對的。
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      II.1. Thank you for reminding me to turn off the lights. How considerate you are!


        2. What a pity! You should have come to the party last night.

B、寫作構思流程Writing Process
主題:想像自己成為名人後所做的事
時態:提出想像的人物角色扮演及其所從事的活動均為假設的狀況,故需使用假設語氣。
鋪陳:1.主旨句:如果我是有名的電影明星,我的生活會多采多姿,與平凡人的生活截然不同。(Sentence 1)
2.細節發展:先說明幻想中的生活會是如何,再進一步闡述自己會想做哪些事。(Sentence 2~8)
(1)幻想中的生活:A.到世界各地拍電影,並藉此體驗不同的文化。
B.透過自己的電影,向全世界介紹台灣文化。
(2)想做的事:A.創造新產品如香水或服飾,藉此開創流行趨勢。
B.利用商品盈餘來幫助非洲的居民。
3.結論句:如果我是電影明星的話,我的生活是多麼地美好啊!(Sentence 9)
注意:1.凡是針對現在的事實提出假設的狀況,可用句型If + S + were/V-ed…, S + would/should/could/might + V…

2.若是針對過去的事實提出假設的狀況,句型可用If + S + had V-en…, S + would/should/could/might + have V-en…
C、範文Sample
If I were a big movie star, I would lead a fantastic life that would be very different from the lives of normal people. “My life would not consist of only exams and the daily routine. Instead, it would be so amazing that each day would be like a new adventure. I would travel to many different places around the world to shoot movies, and this would give me the chance to experience various cultures. At the same time, I would show the world the beauty of Taiwanese culture through my movies. Besides working hard in show business, I would try to create my own products, such as a perfume or a clothing brand, and set new fashion trends. I would never be just a stereotypical movie star, seeking fame and wealth. In fact, I would use the money I made from the sales of my own products to improve the lives of people in Africa. Oh, how wonderful my life would be, if I were a movie star!

D.實戰演練提示:人常會有不同的幻想,想像自己是國際巨星、運動明星、大企業家、國王、將軍或作家。你可曾有過奇特的想法?寫一篇短文,題目為”If I Were a(n)…”,寫出你的幻想,並寫出你想要做的事情有哪些。



Unit 1: The Subject I Like Best in School
A、句型重點Sentence Pattern Focus
I. not only…but also… 不但而且
It is not only a good tool for entertainment but also an important means of communication.
Mr. Wu is not only a dancer but also a famous writer.
This room is not only dark but also damp.
Not only did Jane offer the emotional support, but she also volunteered to pay Jim’s massive medical bills.
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. Susan不僅是個才華洋溢的鋼琴家,她還是個有名的畫家。
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2. 林先生不僅會說流利的英文,他還精通西班牙文。
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Unit 1: 
I. 1. Susan is not only a talented pianist but also a famous painter.
        2. Not only does Mr. Lin speak fluent English, but he also masters Spanish.

II. as + adv. / many Ns + as one can = as + adv. / many Ns + as possible 盡某人所能
I expose my self to this language as much as I can by reading English novels and listening to radio programs in English.
Although John ran as fast as he could, he still failed to catch the bus.
I will reply to your e-mail as soon as I can. = I will reply to your e-mail as soon as possible.
I memorize as many English words as possible / I can.
㊣句型翻譯Sentence Pattern Translation
1. 此外,我以每天放學後沿著河邊慢跑,週末時到山區健行的方式,盡可能接觸大自然。
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2. 高中生在空閒時間應盡可能多閱讀中文經典著作。
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      II.1. In addition, I expose myself to nature as much as I can by jogging along the riverside after school every day and going hiking in the mountains on weekends.

        2. Senior High school students should read as many Chinese classics as they can in their leisure time.

B、寫作構思流程Writing Process
主題:在學校裡最喜歡的科目
時態:除非文中提到過去發生的事,否則談論目前的現況一般多用現在簡單式。
鋪陳:1.主旨句:直接點明在學校裡最喜歡的科目是英文。(Sentence 1)
2.細節發展:先說明喜歡英文的原因,再接著提出學習英文的心得。(Sentence 2~7)
(1)原因:英文不只是個能幫助達到娛樂效果的工具,也是重要的溝通方式。
舉例:A.看英文電影或聽英文歌曲時能了解其台詞或歌詞,能帶來樂趣。
B.透過網際網路,使用英文結交世界各地的朋友。
(2)學習心得:上每堂英文課都很專心、盡可能多背單字、藉由閱讀英文小說及收聽英語廣播節目盡量接觸它。
3.結論句:因為有毅力和興趣,現在表現愈來愈好,覺得恨開心。(Sentence 8)

注意:段落寫作中第一個句子通常是主旨句(Topic Sentence),接下來的數個句子是支持細節(Supporting Details)。支持句的主要功能有三個:詳述細節、解釋原因、舉例說明,例如第一段先解釋最喜歡英文的原因(because…),接著再舉例說明(For example,…)
C、範文Sample
The subject I like best in school is English. I like English because it is not only a good tool for entertainment but also an important means of communication. For example, when I watch English movies or listen to English songs, I can understand what the lines mean, and this makes me happy. I have also made many friends from around the world on the Internet. We all communicate in English, the international language.
Because I like English very much, I pay attention in all of my English classes, and I memorize as many English words as possible. In addition, I expose myself to this language as much as I can by reading English novels and listening to radio programs in English. Learning English was not easy at first, but because of my perseverance and interest, I am happy to say that my English keeps on getting better and better every day.

D.實戰演練提示:求學的過程中你最喜歡的科目是哪一科?請以 “The Subject I Like Best in School”為題寫一篇短文,說明你喜歡該科的原因,並提出你個人的學習心得。

2017年2月13日 星期一

From Sentences to Composition

[作文佳句精選]
情緒類
01. I smile with a gleam of pride in my eyes. 帶著自信微笑
使用時機:替換掉 I smile單純兩個字。笑有很多種,而這句適合用在「感到無比成就感時」的情緒用語。

02. I utter a cry of joy. 喜極而泣
使用時機:這是很多同學寫比賽經驗、或是講到「努力有了代價時」愛用之詞。

03. I am radiant with happiness. 超級快樂
使用時機:替換掉 I am happy 這麼單純的字。

04. I feel a quiver of excitement. 興奮到起顫
使用時機:替換掉 I am excited 這麼單純的字。

05. I clench my teeth to hold back tears 咬緊牙根忍住淚
使用時機:這是很多同學寫比賽經驗,或是講到「努力不懈時」愛用之詞。

06. I feel a lump in my throat because of … 我因而哽咽
使用時機:用「哽咽」比單純的 I feel sad更來的生動。

07. I am liable to cry at any moment. 我很愛
使用時機:cry這個字可以被替換,而這個句型替換掉了I am easy to .....

08. My emotions alternate between anger and despair.生氣絕望間擺盪
使用時機: 表達生氣時情緒不穩的生動之詞。

09. In a rage, S V 很生氣之下,……
使用時機:能簡化句子,以後別再說Because I am angry, I ....

10. blunts my grief for事情  麻痺我對...的悲傷
使用時機:這是同學在寫「悲傷經驗」時,最後很愛用這種句子結尾

11. Throwing all caution to the winds, S V  不顧一切地,....
使用時機:這是一個同學很愛用,但總是寫不出來的副詞片語,可以用來接你「莽撞舉動」、或是「單純下定決心的舉動」

12. Fear of N is bred into me.   的害怕襲入全身
使用時機:表達「做錯事時」的生動之詞。

13. I have a clear conscience. 我問心無愧
使用時機:介紹自己、介紹他人時,「問心無愧」不知為何很多同學很愛寫XD

14. I venture to V 我鼓起勇氣去...
使用時機:替換掉 I gather my courage to V

15. I suffer agonies of regret.  我非常懊悔
使用時機:替換掉 I feel regreted

16. I have an abiding passion for...  ....有持續的愛
使用時機:萬用句型之一,表達自己的喜好時必用句型。

17. 事情 is hideous for me. 事情對非常厭惡
使用時機:萬用句型之一,表達自己的厭惡時必用句型。

個性類
01. I am cut out for N/Ving 我天生適合去
使用時機: 萬用句型之一,表達自己的才能時必用句型。

02. I am a devout naturalist. 崇向自然者
使用時機:進階句型,表達自己的喜好時必用句型。 naturalist 可以被替換)

03. N is alien to my nature. …對我格格不入
使用時機:萬用句型之一,表達自己的厭惡時必用句型。

04. I am precise in my work. 做事一絲不苟
使用時機:介紹自己、介紹他人時,「一絲不苟」不知為何很多同學很愛寫XD

05. I see things through rose-colored spectacles. 我很樂觀
使用時機:介紹自己、介紹他人時,「樂觀」不知為何很多同學很愛寫XD

06. My words coincide with my deeds. 言行一致
使用時機:除了用來表述自己,也可活用在「論說文」,表達「為了達成目標,要親自去達成」時可用的諺語。

07. My adoration of N is incurable. 愛到無可救藥
使用時機:萬用句型之一,表達自己的喜好時必用句型。

人物類
01. Curious throngs of people are standing in a cluster around… 一群好奇民眾圍繞著….圍觀
使用時機:這是寫看圖作文時,常常會看到有一群人在一起,這時你就可以這麼寫

02. My skin is purely white yet with a reddish tint. 白裡透紅
使用時機:描繪人物的生動用語。

03. I have alternated my appearance a lot. 我外觀變了很多
使用時機:描繪人物的生動用語。寫完這句後,後面可以開始接「外貌上」的種種改變。

04. The dress is a perfect foil for my terrific figure. …成了很強烈的襯托
使用時機:進階用語。the dress my terrific figure可以被替換,用於表示服裝、個性、行為上的強烈差異都很適合。

論說類
01. Music knows no frontiers. 音樂無國界
使用時機:萬用句型。Music可以被代換,你可以說文化、網路.....

02. I spend my leisure time listening to music to the exclusion of all else. 除了聽音樂外,什麼都不做
使用時機:表達「休閒時間最什麼」的生動用語。

03. I feel a vocation to V 有使命感要去……
使用時機:表達出「非得去做...」的生動用語。

04. I take …… as gospel. 為圭臬
使用時機:萬用句型之一。代替掉I think it's very important to.....

05. Age has mellowed me. 歲月使我成熟
使用時機:當你要表達「我長大了」時,先寫這一句,然後後方可以接你學到了什麼人生道理。

06. An ounce of practice is worth a pound of theory. 實踐勝於理論
使用時機:這是同學論說文裡愛用的句子。

07. The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak. 心有餘而力不足
使用時機:表達「能力不足」之感嘆時的諺語。

08. My effort doesn’t pay off. 徒勞無功
使用時機:表達「一切到頭來全是一場空」之感嘆時的生動用法。

09. It is a blaze of publicity that…  …是眾所皆知的
使用時機:萬用句型之一,論說文經典開場白。

10. We are in bondage to social conventions, so… 因為我們受到社會規範的約束,所以
使用時機:論說文裡,當你要提到「大環境影響人」時可參考之句子。

11. put a damper on my confidence. …打擊我信心
使用時機:表達「努力過程中召受的挫折」時參考佳句。

12. is a shattering blow to my pride. …打擊我信心
使用時機:表達「努力過程中召受的挫折」時參考佳句。

13. “這裡擺諺語” is a proverb much bandied about and absolutely right. 俗話說得好:
使用時機:萬用句型之一,替換掉已經是老掉牙的 as a saying goes

14. If we look closely at our life from different perspectives, there will be a lot of surprising discoveries every day.
換個角度看人生,會發現更多驚奇
使用時機:這是論說文裡同學很愛嘗試的句子。

15. Semper Paratus, Always Ready. (諺)準備好的人終獲勝
使用時機:表達「為了夢想會持之以恆努力」的超棒諺語。

16. The outsider sees the game best. 旁觀者清
使用時機:敘述故事時,表達「身為第三者的優勢時」的佳句。

17. Education refines one’s manners. 教育使人優雅
使用時機:Education可以被代換。用來表示「某事物的優點時」可用。

18. I thrive on new challenges. 我享受新挑戰
使用時機:介紹自己、介紹他人時,「樂於挑戰」不知為何很多同學很愛寫XD

19. The park is a casual sort of place, with the majority of people easygoing and carefree.公園是人人放鬆悠閒的地方
使用時機: The park 可以被替換。表達某「地方之優點時」可用。

20. I am apt to fail in life. 我容易受挫
使用時機:表達自己「努力時受挫」的用語。

21. I know what it is like to V, so I do sympathize with you. 我瞭解你的感受而同情你
使用時機:書信體萬用句型。同學相當愛寫。

22. My grade is on a downward spiral. …每下愈況
使用時機:用來表達「某物讓你在....每下愈況時」可用。

23. Let’s dispense with the formalities. 免去俗套
使用時機:論說文的進階用語。可以替換掉中文常常結尾時愛講的「朋友們,讓我們一起努力!」

24. The days’ waiting for the result of the exam seemed like an eternity. 等放榜得日子真是無限漫長
使用時機:寫故事時,同學愛用的句子。

25. Nowadays teenagers tend to resort to violence when facing problems. 青少年容易訴諸暴力
使用時機:viloence可以被替換,當你要寫「訴諸」兩字時,是用這句型。

26. When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. 當環境變的惡劣,勇於奮鬥的人仍繼續。
使用時機:表達「努力不懈」之諺語。

27. Ignorance is bliss. 無知便是福
使用時機:表達「知足、謙虛、快樂」時都可以用得上。

28. Too much desire will breed disaster. 貪得無厭者終嚐惡果
使用時機:表達「貪婪、知足」時可用得上。

29. Small as store it would be, it all perfectly performed. 麻雀雖小,五臟俱全

使用時機:表達「某物、某地方的優點時」可用之佳句。